Thesis statement: Video games such as "Planet Green Game" gives players the choice/chance to do the right thing whereas games such as "Grand Theft Auto" only gives players the choice to do things that are ethically wrong.
Outline: I. Thesis statement
A. Major claim
II. Explain why Planet Green Game gives right choices and why GTA gives wrong choices.
III. Talk about how video games challenge people's moral values/ethics.
IV. Explore how both games shpw how much easier it is to make certain choices in a video game than actually doing it in real life.
V. Conclusion
3 comments:
You have a good thesis. Your outline makes sense. You might want to go into full description of the game including how the game makes you feel and how others may perceive. This would help give your paper some fullness.
I browsed through a few theses, and I finally found yours, which actually has an argument. You could maybe change your wording or just specify briefly what the "right thing" is. Good thesis!
i really like the thesis. I havnt came across a thesis about ethics in video games yet. Maybe make your outline a little detailed so you have enough to write about. also i would check with prof. anchetta using GTA. i was gonna use that and he said we had to use video games off his site idk tho just check.
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